How to write a good personal statement?

[skylerdodson]

What are some tips for writing a personal statement for graduate school, and how should it differ from other types of essays?

I can’t figure out how to start my personal statement. I have an outline and know what I want to say, but I’m aiming for a strong opening.

I've already shared my story and academic interests in my Statement of Purpose (SOP) for this graduate program. Is it okay to use the same story in my personal statement, or would it be a bad idea to repeat content from the SOP?

 

[kennyfrye]

The best advice I can give is to make it personal - stories work really well and grab attention! Remember, they read hundreds of these. It took me a long time to get mine right, but one day it just clicked. Don’t give up; every intro that doesn’t work brings you one step closer to the one you'll submit.

 

[christina]

Hey there!

First off, it's totally okay to have some overlap in your personal statement and SOP, but you’ll want to make sure each piece brings something unique to the table. Your SOP is often more academic and goal-focused, explaining why you want to pursue a specific program and how your background aligns with it. A personal statement, on the other hand, is where you can let your personality shine through a bit more and focus on who you are beyond just your academic interests. Think of it as a way to show what drives you on a personal level or what life experiences shaped your character and resilience.

If you’re struggling with the opening, here’s a tip: Try starting with a brief anecdote or a defining moment that captures a core value or experience that led you toward your field. It doesn’t need to be super intense, just something that gives the reader a quick sense of you as a person before diving into your achievements or academic interests.

And if you’re feeling stuck, I’d recommend trying out ChatGPT or other AI tools to get some ideas. You could start by having it generate different opening sentences or even ask it to help brainstorm transitions. It can be really helpful to shake loose ideas you might not have thought of on your own. Just remember to keep your own voice in the final draft; AI tools are great for rough drafts or getting past writer’s block, but you’ll want to make sure the final piece sounds like you.

Good luck - you’ve got this!

 

[donna]

The most important thing in a personal statement is to tailor it to the specific program you're applying to.

Different programs have different requirements, so make sure you read the instructions carefully and include everything they ask for.

For example, some programs may want you to talk about your research interests, while others may not. Some might ask you to name a specific supervisor, while others won't. Some may want you to explain why you want to join the program, while others may not.

 

[writtent]

Start the personal statement with a compelling introduction. Avoid beginning with "My name is..." Focus on your enthusiasm for the program, how your background aligns with graduate school, and your readiness to begin.

For example:

After completing my undergraduate studies in computer science, I am eager to deepen my knowledge and skills in this field. I am interested in the M.S. in Computer Science program because I want to expand my understanding of advanced algorithms and artificial intelligence. To achieve my goal of contributing to cutting-edge technology, I need to gain expertise in software development and data analysis to solve complex problems in real-world applications.

As for repeating content from your Statement of Purpose, it's generally okay to mention similar themes or ideas, but try to approach them from a different angle. The personal statement is more about you as a person, your values, and how those align with the program, whereas the SOP focuses more on your academic and professional goals. If you’re feeling stuck, consider checking out some personal statement writing services to help refine your approach and ensure that it’s unique and engaging.

 

[jovanniglover]

Always write your introduction last! You’re introducing the paragraphs that come after, so it’s easier to do once they’re written. The same goes for the conclusion.

When I was writing mine, everything felt cheesy, but I think that’s just in your head. Be honest and speak from the heart, and it will come together. After writing the rest, the intro will feel natural.

There’s no right or wrong way to do it!

Good luck!

 

[talondelgado]

Be personal and specific - many people overlook this. Clearly discuss what you’ve done in your free time and share your opinions on the subject. Avoid wasting space on your A-levels or schoolwork and explaining why they’re relevant to your university subject - this doesn’t reflect who you are or what you’re capable of.